Wednesday, November 23, 2005
dhina
Writing time!
Friday, November 18, 2005
Pringgo: introduction
Pringgo: Outline
Wasti: Intro, opinion and outline
Task 1
My name is Wasti Darmayanti. I was born in
Using blogs in a writing course is an interesting and terrifying experience. I have ever heard a word blogs, but I do not know what the use of it. I realize that in a modern era right now I have to know but in the other hand I am afraid when my writing is read by other people. Right now people around the world will read and give a comment about it. Yet right now I have to learn to listen and accept other people opinion to become a good writer.
Outline;
Thesis statement: Nowadays, boys are more pay attention for their appearance.
Topic sentence:
- Boys are pay attention for their appearance to be more attractive.
- They are willing to push traditional boundaries about become beautiful.
- Besides that they just want to keep their appearance looks good.
Conclusion: there is no wrong or right when boys or girls want to keep their appearance, so do not judge people from their outer.
Andry: Outline
TS : Being mean is needed in the work field
#we can use all kinds of things to achieve the goals
Andry: introduction & opinion
My name is andry, I 21 years old. I live at
In my opinion using blogs in writing course is kindda good things. I agree about the aim of using blogs can give experience of having a wider audience rather just the teacher that can only see the writing. And using blogs can give us more knowledge about writing skills that others people had, not just other people but people around the world, because we globally connected in the internet. We can also learn toward the comments about our blogs from others.
Tribuwana: introduction, opinion & outline
I am Wana (Tribuwana). I am studying in Faculty of language and literature in SWCU in Salatiga now. I want to be a teacher and a journalist one day. I like sport, listening music and watching television. I'm happy when I found someone who like to talk about religi, pshycology and phylosofy. I live in a boarding house. In addition, I always miss my parents, and my sisters. Especially, my favorite foods. my main hobby is snacking, so if you come to my boarding house it would be better if you bring some snack ok. I thing it is a good idea:}
Using blog in a writing class is a new experience for me. Actually, it is interesting. In addition I can learn more how to writing well from your comment or critisms. I like to write a letter to my parents in Tegal and I really enjoy it. Yet, it is different if I have to write in “blog”. I hope there is always somebody who would like to give me a/some comment or “good” critism. So don't forget to give me critism or comment ok:) I appreciate it.
THANK YOU B4.
Outline
Your favorite music is a reflection of your personality.
# Jazz music reflect a person who has clear principle and very explicit.
# Indy music reflect a creative person and a person who brave enough to do some extraordinary things
# Classical music reflect a person who always keeps his principle and conservative
Tuesday, November 15, 2005
The first and second tasks
Yet, I'm so proud of my students because they took the challenge bravely, and I'm positive in any ways that they will produce interesting pieces of writing.
The first task that I set for them is to write a paragraph of their introduction containing their bio and a paragraph expressing their opinion of the use of blogging to publish their writing piece. The second task is an outline of their five paragraph essay, containing a thesis statement and three topic sentences. The deadline is this Friday at 10 AM (West Indonesian Time, GMT +7). Good luck, everyone!
To our curious, faithful and critical readers, we will appreciate if you can leave your constructive comments to the students' postings. They will have to write the essay on Wednesday next week at 4 - 6 PM, so we expect to get your comments by Sunday/Monday.
Thanks for stopping by!
Neny Isharyanti
The teacher
Tuesday, November 08, 2005
Warm Welcome!
The aim of this blog is to provide a greater audience to my students of Writing 2. By posting their essays in this blog, I hope that they will be able to get their voice heard by the world and for them to get some useful comments to improve their writing pieces.
Please help us by leaving your comments. Any comments will be welcome.
For my students, welcome to the blogging world and have a good experience.
Neny Isharyanti
The teacher