Wednesday, November 30, 2005
Having a special friend in the same class (Revised)
If we are in the same class with our special friend off course directly we can work with our partner to study and do tasks which are given by our teachers. Doing tasks together can make our relationship with them closer. We also can make an appointment or even invite their house. We have more chance to share our problems especially about our lessons. When we have a problem, we can ask her/him to help us. If unfortunately we forgot our task, our partner would remain us about it. In addition it can improve our mark in class.
When we are in the same class with our partner we can know more about our partner’s habits because we can meet her/him everyday especially in class. Most couple always tries to cover their bad attitude. Not knowing our partner’s bad habits can lead to a serious problem at the end. In class, we can know our couple’s bad habit too. We can see directly if our couple is a boring person or not. We can know if our couple is a diligent or a lazy person from their attitudes in class.
It also interesting to know their relationship with other friends. We can see their personality when they are in front of their friends, if our couple is a good person or not. By knowing how our partner relates to others. We can compare their personalities with our personalities. So we also can decide if our couple is a suitable couple for us or not.
Knowing our couple’s habits and personalities can help us to find the best way to keep our relationship with them. If there is something wrong with our relationship with our couple, our knowledge about our couple’s personality can help us to solve our problems. Having a same class with our special friend and trying to be the best classmate could be a way to know more about our partner.
Cell Phone (Revised)
Cell phone is very well known, because many people have and use it for communication. It is simpler than writing a letter and cheaper than using a telephone. The users of cell phone coming from many different ages, from teenagers until the older ones.
Now, cell phone is not a strange thing for us again, because if you want it, you can have it easily. The price is affordable, but it depends on what kind of cell phone you want. If you want a cell phone without a camera facility, you can get it under 1 million rupiahs. If you want a cell phone with camera, you have to spend your money more than 1 million rupiahs.
Besides the reasons above, cell phone being famous because it is always up to date and also easy to use. There are many kinds of cell phones available out there. The brands also various, for example Nokia, Samsung, Siemens, Motorola, Philips, etc. Each company has different product and style to interest the costumers, so they have to follow the terms. They also minimalized the difficulties in operating the cell phone. So that, the consumers can use it easily.
Most of people in the world have cell phones. They use it for communication. And it is not a strange thing again because if you want it, you can have it with affordable price. Besides, it is always up to date and easily to use. Because of its usages and its facilities, many people consider using cell phone for communication. So, cell phone is a popular thing in communication now.
A Key for Successful Learning of English (revised)
For successful learning of English you need to have self-confidence. When you are learning a language it means that you will learn a new system of sounds, many rules of grammar, and remember thousands of new words. In this process, naturally you are afraid for making mistakes because you feel bad about your English skill. And it means that you have a low self-confidence. However, if you realize that your self-confidence is still low, it’s better for you to develop it. Having self-confidence in learning English can keep you from doing the best you can and motivate you to say or write in English whether you will make mistakes or not. It is because you realize that everyone ever made mistakes when they try to say and write things in English. Furthermore, you are using your mistake as a stepping stone to develop your skill in English.
Being a risk-taking person is also necessary for your success in learning English. When you tend to try out a new language you need to be a risk taker. It means that you try to say things in English even if you might make a mistake. Furthermore, being risk taker is closely related to the self-confidence. However, if you are a risk taker when trying out language, you need to make intelligent guesses, do not take silly risks or guess blindly. It’s because you have to be responsible towards your answer.
Great motivation is also essential for your English acquisition. Motivation means really wanting to learn English for a reason. Moreover, motivation to learn English can come from you and it means that you are doing it because you want to do it and have your own curiosity. So, it is called Intrinsic Motivation. Instead, your motivation can come from others and it means that based on reward from outside. That’s why it is called Extrinsic Motivation. In addition, most people argued that intrinsic motivation is superior to extrinsic. It’s because internal motivation will keep you on learning for a long time and you will learn more.
As you can see, your characteristics can influence your success in learning English as a foreign language. For successful learning of English you need to gain your self-confidence, be a risk-taking person, and also have a great internal motivation. If you can develop all of these essential characteristics, you will be able to gain your skill in English.
Many pepople prefer to use motorcycle to go back to their hometown
From the shape of the motorcycle we can see that it does not need a large place to park. So, the rider can easier stop if they are getting tired. They can stop wherever they want. For example, they can take a rest on the side of the road. It will not disturb another people who also use the road because 1,5m square place is enough to park a motorcycle. For them who use a car, they have to look for a parking lot or another large place to park their car.
Another reason is, by riding a motorcycle people can avoid the traffic jam. In the Idul Fitri holiday, there are a lot of people who use the road. The main road will full of thousands car and it can released from the traffic. They can do nothing if they are jammed on the traffic. For the motorcycle rider, they can release from the traffic by passing a space between two cars which queue at the traffic. Or they can turn back to look for an alternative road.
Another comparison is, ride a motorcycle is cheaper than ride a car. First of all, for them who use their own vehicle, they have to take some preparation and a car will need more money to be prepared. Second, a car need more fuel than motorcycle so car users have to pay a lot to buy fuel. Third, if the car is broken on the way a car user have to bring their car to the garage and it will make them spend a lot of money because a car garage is expensive. The simplest thing that we can see is, if they want to stop to take a rest or having some meal they also spend more money to pay the park than if they use motorcycle.
It is easier to ride a motorcycle than a car in Idul Fitri holiday. A motorcycle rider can easier take a rest on their way because it does not need a large place to park . They also can avoid the traffic jam by passing a space between two cars. Besides that, ride a motorcycle is cheaper it need less fuel than car. Indeed, many people prefer to ride a motorcycle than a car to go back to their home town in Idul Fitri holiday because of some reasons.
The Effect of Bali Bombing (revised)
Firstly, Bali bombing causes a lot of people died and injured. More than 107 people died and 65 people were injured in that incident. Most of them were foreign tourists who still enjoyed their night and some Indonesian people who stayed in the cafe. When the accident happened, they tried to save their life, but the bomb damaged everything, even their life. In the tragedy of Bali bombing, there were a lot of victims who did not know anything until suddenly they lost their life.
Secondly, tourists do not want to come to Bali again after the tragedy of Bali bombing. They wanted to leave Indonesia, especially Bali, as soon as the accident happened. Suddenly, Ngurah Rai airport became full of tourists. They wanted to go back to their county which they thought is safer. They thought that Indonesia is a dangerous place to visit. They were afraid and they wanted to be away from Indonesia. I have read from the newspaper and found an article which showed about tourists’ comments about Bali bombing. One of the tourists said “It is the last time for us to visit this country.”
Also, Bali bombing makes the world has a bad opinion about Indonesia. Bali bombing brings Indonesia in the worst situation. The world does not believe in Indonesia again. A lot of countries in the world do not want to invest their asset to Indonesia. They are afraid if someday that tragedy will happen again and of course they will lose everything they have in here. The world says that Indonesia is a country which is full of terror and there are a lot of terrorists who are ready to kill people with their bombs. The world thinks that Indonesia is a dangerous country.
As you can see, terrorists who did Bali bombing did not think further about the effect. The terrorists cause a lot of bad effects to Indonesia. They did something disadvantageous for this lovely country. A lot of people died, tourists do not want to come to Bali, and a bad opinion about Indonesia, are the real bad effects of Bali bombing. Terrorists just want to do everything they want but they are not concerned about the effects.
KNOW SOMEONE'S PERSONALITY FROM HIS/HER FAVORITE MUSIC (REVISED)
Many people love jazz music which is popular as the music of the slaves in America. Jazz music may reflect a person who has clear principle and very explicit. A person who likes jazz music knows if a key to play the instruments in jazz music is the same in every song. Because of the key will not change. So, it is the reason why people who like jazz music do not like change their principle and always keep their principle strongly. Yet, not only in keeping their principle, they could interpret their principle in their life.
Classical music might reflect a person who is independent and has traditional principle in his life. Classical music was developed from more than a century years ago. Every classical musician didn’t like to make a special key to play the music, but they have to follow some rules in playing that music. Yet, they still could play like as they want, it means they free to play it. If person have independent soul, they will choose this kind music. However, they still keep “old principle” like as old people ever had. It makes them become a conservative people.
In the other hand, Indy music may reflect a person who are creative and brave enough to make something new which does not exist before. With adding some instruments or even make a new key of tones, they can make an old music to be a new one. Not only that, they could make a new kind of music. It means the new music do not included in pop, jazz or classic music, etc. In addition the best thing to that, they do not afraid to show their music to all people all over the world.
It is interesting to know who you are from your favorite music. A person may choose more than one the kinds of music. Yet, every one have only one music they most favorite. I believe it. As a result if you enjoy listening music, you can know your personality from your favorite music. Because of music could reflect who you are.
Undetectable Mobile Phones Effects(revised)
Mobile phones using can cause brain tumor. If the user uses the mobile phones too close to the ear when s/he is listening, they will have a 30% increased risk of the effect. The growth of tumor cells could be increased dramatically after an exposure to the mobile phone radiation. This radiation is absorbed by the brain neuron and started to ruin the brain cells. Early symptoms of brain tumor can be hearing loss, loss of balance or noises in one ear. But these symptoms are very common for many other reasons, not only the symptoms of brain cancer.
Another effect from mobile phones radio frequency is that it could harm the body cells and damage DNA. The radio frequency produces the type of electromagnetic radiation. This radiation is absorbed into the body and produces heat. While the radiation interacts with the body tissues, it also destroys the body cells growth and damages the DNA work. The symptoms are usually unseen, like fatigue, but people sometimes didn’t realize it.
Moreover, cancer of Alzheimer is another effect that is caused of using mobile phones. Alzheimer is a kind of disease like weaken in memorizing. The radiation from the mobile phones already destroys cells in parts of the brain. It destroys the soft part that is important for memory, movement and learning. It could be terrifying in cases when someone who might normally get Alzheimer in old age, could get it much earlier.
As we learn from this explanation, a cell phone can bring undetectable effects for human health. These effects actually are harmful to the body, but many people seem did not really notice and certain about that. They notice this as an ordinary symptom. That’s why the effects are undetectable.
Children Should Be Limited on Watching TV (Revised)
Some TV programs are forbidden to be watched by children. Programs that are filled violence, for example, are really inappropriate for children. They are too young to be filled with something like that. Their memory is still plain to accept it. There may be influence on their behavior if they are watching program that shouldn’t be watched. As a result, maybe their character gets mature before the time.
On the other hand, children must get education from TV programs. Beside as an entertainment, there are some educational programs on TV, in which children can learn something. Take, for example, kids program on Lativi named Dora. From that, children less than 5 years old can learn to count, remember names of thing’s, etc. Children can learn educational things through an interesting way.
Moreover, children are not able yet to choose appropriate TV programs. So, parents must pay attention on what kind of programs their children watch on TV. If they watch wrong program, parents must give warning. In this way, children will be accustomed to know which and what kind of TV programs should they watch. That must be done because it is still too early to know what kind of TV programs they should watch.
Paying good attention towards children when they are watching TV is a must for parents. How busy the parents are, they must lead their children to watch TV programs that are allowed for children. In this case, reminding the effects of watching unsuitable TV programs for their children, so parents must prepare the time for their children to give a right direction.
Satya Wacana Christian University(revised)
SWCU is located in a strategic place than the others are. SWCU is placed in Diponegoro Street. Diponegoro Street is the main road. The public transportation runs through it. More over if you want to visit SWCU, you will not find any difficulties because the location is easy to be reached than the others.
SWCU provides modern facilities for the students to study. Some modern facilities such as OHP and Laptop are used in teaching learning processes. It makes the students to be able to study more easily, because the availability of good facility is an important thing for students to study.
The quality education of SWCU has been recognized in Indonesia. It is shown by the fact that many people from many places in Indonesia decided to study here. You can find Ambonese, Balinese and many others. More over, you can also find foreigners who are studying in SWCU. It is rare finding foreigners who are studying in other colleges in my city except in SWCU. It shows that the quality education of SWCU is not only recognized in Indonesia but also in other countries.
SWCU is a better place to study than the others in my city because of its location, its facilities and its quality of education. For those reasons, many people are more interested to study here than in the other colleges. If you don’t believe it, just try to study in it and you can see the differences.
Not all books are good for student (revised)
One of the books may contain information about sex, porn, and erotic stories which are not educational. For example, newspapers and magazines such as Meteor, Playboy, Popular or FHM, they contained information about sex. There weren’t consuming to students. It is just for 21 year old readers and above. It can make they’re mind is full of negatively. And maybe the students doing like in the books.
Then, the other types of the books that aren’t supposed to be consumed to by students are about terrorism. We know that the last month, Indonesia have some problems with terrorism. They disturb and make a bomb to make people scare. And Indonesian people are disappointed because many terrorist are younger. The terrorist are thinking like that maybe they read a wrong book about Jihad and another books like that. They don’t know that it is a wrong way. They learn, but they didn’t know about the meaning of that.
The books are told about religion. If the books contains insults one another religion. Maybe one of the religions will be angry and make disturbing. They may disturb the followers of that religion. And it doesn’t make peace in the world. Or the books are good to read but we can’t learn it goodly like we read. The books like that is for the people are really knows about that.
Not all books are good to improve the mind of students. Actually, we know that we can kinds of books that we want to read but think it’s twice. The books are good to consume if they’re contain something about education. All of the books are important but you must choice, and look how important that book for you.
Cats or dogs? (revised)
The first one is because cats have a lovely face that makes me happy. Dogs’ face didn’t as cute as cats’ face. Every time I look at her face, I always feel happy, moreover when I feel angry or unhappy. On the other hand, I didn’t feel that if I look in dogs’ face.
The second reason is because a cat didn’t like to lick. I like dog if he don’t lick me. A dog usually licks us, moreover if he likes us. Of course I didn’t like that. Actually, it’s okay for me if a dog licks me, because I’m not a Moslem, but I think that’s disgusting and I really didn’t like it at all.
The last thing that makes me believe that a cat is better than a dog is because cats can love us back. It doesn’t mean that a dog can not. As you know, a cat is usually spoiled. It makes her really need affection from us. She always wanted to be loved. If we love her, she can easily love us too. That makes me conclude that a cat can easily return our love back than a dog.
Opinion that a dog is better than a cat is still continuing. Yet, because cats’ face that can make you feel happy, cats’ behavior that don’t like to lick, and cats’ habit that can love you back, now you can think by yourself which one is better, cats or dogs. Indeed, having a cat is better than having a dog.
Being mean is needed (revised)
First, in the work field we can say that we don’t had friends or even relatives, because sometimes they can be our biggest enemy when we compete with them they will do anything to defeat us. If we want to succeed we must and dare to cheat or we can say stab our competitors from behind.
Second, to get the promotion or achieve our goals we can use any kinds of ways. Even the ways we don’t really like. For example we cheated the job like we doing 2 jobs in 1 time or we work with other companies to get partners or more money. We can also sacrifice our friends to get closer with the most important people in our company.
The last thing that we must remember is that we are alone in the company, so we must think about ourselves only and forget the rest. We work to achieve something that is just for us and we don’t work harder for our friend. Even though we are so mean and cruel in the work field, we do not need bring the attitude to the other environments that we are living in, but most people still think that in their house they can still compete, with their neighbors, family, even with their own children. Because of that, people in mostly big cities in which competition in the work field is usual, are usually selfish and stubborn.
From all those reasons I can conclude that in work field we can be mean and selfish, but there is still a limit for that. It maybe true that we are alone in the work field and we do not need friends, but when we come out from that we must know that we still have family and friends. Being mean is needed in the work field but we must remember that we are humans and humans need others to live.
Boys should be beautiful (revised)
First of all, boys pay attention to their appearance to be more attractive. It happened when boys are looking for a girl. Of course girls expect if boys appear beautiful and smell good. Beautiful in here does not mean like a girl, but means neat. Besides that, nowadays many advertisements, movie stars influence youngsters to have a stereotype that good boys are the ones with good appearance. For instance, I can see from the football player David Beckham. In here, David Beckham always pays attention to his appearance. He is very fashionable, goes to saloon rather than barber shop. I read the article in Jakarta Post newspaper last year. However, of course it should be with certain limit. For instance, I had one bad experience with one of them. When we were shopping together, he was confused when he was trying to choose among five pairs of trousers. To me, they were all the same. Later, it took him ages to finish grooming. I stopped going out with him.
Next, boys want to keep their appearance to look good. In this case, for some boys they just want to look clean without being like a girl. For example, they go to the beauty salon to have their hair cut rather to the barber. They even have body care products in their toilet (face cleansing and moisturizing, sun care, and hair removal), they use it because of their needs, but some people will tease at him. Yet, it does not make them feel any less masculine or any less heterosexual.
The last, they are willing to push the traditional boundaries about being beautiful. It happens because for some people in old days they will say if boys pay more attention in their appearance they like girls. Still boys are very secure in their sexuality. They think it is not wrong if boys want to look neat, clean like what girls do, as long as it still has not cross the limitation. They do it because they thing that they are human that should look after their appearance too.
As we can see, that there is no wrong or right statement when boys want to pay more attention in their appearance. They do it because they just want to look attractive, good and push the traditional boundaries about being beautiful. In my opinion, do not judge people just from their outer appearance.
Being Rich is Annoying (revised)
Firstly, there will be lots of people who consider themselves poor who will ask for your help by giving them money. It will be annoying if you are asked to give the poor a help when they never work themselves. Sometimes they will just show up in an unexpected time, like when you are spending your time with your family in a park, or when you are eating your lunch in a restaurant.
Secondly, you might feel that everyone surround you is only interested in your money and it will create an insecure feeling. Supposedly that your friend offers you a help, you will think “what does he want from me?” Your friend may indeed offer you a help sincerely, but you will always have a negative thought about it. If such thing happened, then your friends will avoid you and no one wants to be your friend.
The last, you won’t be able to sleep well every night because you are afraid of thieves who will steal your wealth. There are many cases of thieves killing rich people to steal their wealth. Most of the thieves will do their “activity” at night when the owner of the house is sleeping. This will definitely make you to be a very careful person. A little noise in your yard will wake you up from your sleep. Even though you may have guards, you won’t be able to sleep well, because they can betray you anytime and steal your wealth. You will think that the only one whom you can put your trust is yourself.
It is true that many people will do everything to be rich. However, the question is, are you happy being rich? Considering the three reasons that I give you above, being rich is definitely not fun. Instead, it can be bothersome. So, do you want to be rich?
Wednesday, November 23, 2005
dhina
Music for the Poeople
Topic sentence;
Music reduce human stress ness.
Music can be a medium to human to improve their creativity.
Music can improve human intelligence.
Concluding sentence;
We know that music become an important role in our life.
Music for the People
Just imagine what will happen with the world with out any music? Some people will say the world just like a hollow planet, not the green planet. There are many words to express music. Yet, I found a word that match with music, which is emotion. Human need it as much as music. There are many advantages of listening music. And the advantages of listening music far outweigh the disadvantages.
From entertainment side, it is easy to explain that. Human need something to hold on to and music is the better way to handle it. Like normally human being, people need to take their entire thick in their head. With music all that kind of problem will be solve with out any problem. Sometimes music become an inspiration when someone desperate to something. Not only that, music can be a medium to show other people feeling too. For example, when men fall in I love with a girl; usually they express it with music. Like Romeo and Juliet love story.
A sense of a human effected with what they see, heard, and feel. And from that reason, music becomes measure to create human attitude. If they like to listening classical music probably they become a spoiled child. Music can affect human censoric and motoric cells in human body. Just what I have said, human is like a mirror. They will reflect what they have seen. So just be careful if someone at your house likes to listening “evil music”.
A smart mother knows that music can improve their son or daughter intelligence, and it was proven. According to the scientist, DNA or RNA of a child improves effortlessly by listening music. Because of that fact, the balance between the left brain and the right brain will equivalent. Yet, some mothers forget how important breast milk and other nutrition for their children. The balance of nutrition and music must equal, not too much or less.
Believe it or not, we were born wit music. Every single day of our life is like a rhythm of music. Each sound that comes out will be a good song if we ply it well. And you know every breath and every beat we take is a pace of music. We can’t life with out it. It is clear that music become an important role in our life.
Communication is very important in our life. Besides talking face to face, we also need something to connect with someone (our friends, our family) in a long distance. In the past, many people used letter or telephone. Now, many people consider to use cellphone than use letter or telephone because it is more practical than them. Moreover, it is not only can be a telephone, but also as a letter (SMS) and for playing games. So, cellphone is a popular thing now.
Cellphone is very well known, because many people have and use it for their way to communicate. It is simpler than write a letter and cheaper than use a telephone. The user of cellphone comes from many different ages, from teenagers until the older one. Now, cellphone is not a strange thing for us again, because if you want it, you can have it. The price is affordable, but it is depends on what kind of cellphone which you want. If you want a general cellphone (without camera), you can get it under 1 million rupiahs. If you want a cellphone with camera, you have to spent your money above 1 million rupiahs.
There are many kinds of cellphone available out there. The brands also various, for example Nokia, Samsung, Siemens, Motorola, Philips, etc. Each company has different product and style to interest the costumers, so they have to follow the terms. Cellphone is being famous because it is always up to date and also easy to use.
Most of people in the world have cellphone . They use it for their way to communicate. And it is not a strange thing again because if you want it, you can have it with affordable price. Besides, it is always up to date and easily to use. Now, cellphone is a popular thing in communication.
A Nightmare From The Raise of BBM
First of all, the raise of BBM price is inappropriate. The increase of the price is too high or too sudden if it compared to people’s power of buying in Indonesia. Most of our people still have low power of buying for BBM, especially poor people. For example, the raise of kerosene price in almost twice than its price before. It is from Rp1.300 per liter up to Rp 2.800 per liter. It will be so difficult for poor people to afford it while they really need it for daily cooking.
The second reason is that the raise of BBM price has caused the raise of public transportation fare. It means that people should spend more money to go to somewhere by the public transportation. For people who is running a small business, especially the one that need transportation, it will be tougher to survive. For example, for some businesses they should raise the price to get some profits while the market is getting weak.
Thirdly, the BBM price has made daily needs price become more difficult to be afforded. It has made life to be so difficult for the lower society. Poor people should work harder to fulfill their daily needs. Of course it is if they have job. It will be so much difficult for the unemployment, such as people at the age above 60 who can’t work effectively anymore, to fulfill their needs.
All the things above are only a piece of cake from what is happening in our nation after the raise of BBM price. In fact, there are still so many things that we can not cover here. According to the reasons above, from the inappropriate raise of BBM price, the raise of public transportation fare, and also the raise of the daily needs price, we can see that the raise of BBM price has caused many bad impact.
KNOW PERSONALITY FROM THE FAVORITE MUSIC
Almost people in the world love to listening music. That’s why there are so many kinds of music. For instance, jazz music, classic music, indy music, etc. Everyone have their own favorite music. In addition to that, your favorite music may be a reflection of your personality.
Jazz music may reflect a person who has clear principle and very explicit. A person who likes jazz music knows if a key to play the instruments in jazz music is the same in every song. Because of the key of tones will not change. So, it is the reason why people who like jazz music do not like change their principle and always keep their principle strongly. Yet, not only in keeping principle they could interpret what they want to do and what they want to get in their life.
Classic music may reflect a person who is independent and has traditional principle in his life. Classic music was made from more than a century years ago. All classical musicians, never made a special key to play the music. They could play like as they want, it means they free to play it. If person have independent soul, they will choose this kind music. In addition, they still keep “old principle” like as old people ever had. So, they become a conservative people.
In the other hand, indy music may reflect people who are creative and brave enough to make something new which is nothing before. With add some instruments or even make a new key of tones, they can make an old music to be a new one. Not only that, they could make a new kind of music. It means the new music do not included in pop, jazz or classic music, etc. In addition the best thing to that, they do not afraid to show their music to all people all over the world.
It is interesting to know who you are from your favorite music. A person may choose more than one the kinds of music. Yet, every one have only one music they most favorite. I believe it. So, if you enjoy listening music, you can know your personality from your favorite music. Because of music could reflect who you are.
Being rich is annoying
There was a good movie titled Richie Rich some years ago. The movie was quite interesting and many people loved that movie. It talks about a very rich family who live in a glamour life. The house of the family was quite big and there’s a large private park inside the area of the house. They even had their own airplane which was ready anytime to bring them everywhere in the world. I recall a good scene when Richie bought his own island and he invited some good friends of his in the island. That’s a little picture of being rich, you will get everything you want if you had much money. Many people want to be rich and no one wants to be poor. However, there are some reasons why being rich is bothersome.
Firstly, there will be lots of people who call themselves poor who ask for your help by giving them money. It will be annoying if you are asked to give the poor a help while they never work on their own. Sometimes they just show up in an unexpected time, like in a time when you are playing with your family, or in a restaurant when you are eating your lunch.
Secondly, you will feel everyone surround you are only interested in your money and it will create an insecure feeling. Suppose that your friend offered you a help, you will think “what does he want from me?” Indeed your friend offered you a help sincerely, but you will always have a negative thinking. Your friends will avoid you and no one wants to be your friend.
The last, you won’t be able to sleep well every night because you are afraid of thieves stealing your wealth. There are many cases of thieves killing rich people to stealth their wealth. Most of the thieves will do their “activity” in the night when the owner of the house is sleeping. The fact will make you a very careful person, a little noise in your yard will wake you up from your sleep. Event though you had guards you won’t be able to sleep well, because they can betray you anytime and steal your wealth. You will think the only one whom you can put your trust on is yourself.
It is true that many people will do everything to be rich. However, the question is, are you happy being rich? Consider the three reasons that I give you above, being rich is definitely not fun, and instead it is bothersome. So, do you want to be rich?
SATYA WACANA CHRISTIAN UNIVERSITY
SWCU is located in a strategic place than the others. SWCU is placed in Diponegoro Street. Diponegoro Street is a main road. It makes public transportation through it. So.. if you want to visit SWCU, you will not find any difficulties because the location is easy to be reached than the others.
SWCU provides modern facilities for the students to study. The modern facilities such as OHP, LAPTOP are used in studying learning process. It makes the students studying easily, because facility is an important thing when the students are studying.
The quality education of SWCU has been recognized in Indonesia. It is shown many people from many places in Indonesia decided to study in it. You can find Ambones, Balinese and many others. More over, you can also find foreigners who are studying in SWCU. It is rare finding foreigners who are studying in the colleges in my city except in SWCU. It shows that the quality education of SWCU is not only recognized in Indonesia but also in other countries.
SWCU is a better place to study than the others in my city because of its location, its facilities and its quality education. For those reasons, many people more interesting to study in it than the others. If you don’t believe it, just try to study in it and you can see the differences.
beaing mean is needed
Being mean is needed in the work field. Everyone will change when they got into the work field even he/she are nice and kind people. People usually think that in the work field they had no friends. They just living alone with their job and accompanied by the competitors. In the work field people just think about the promotion to her/him. They can use any kinds of way to achieve the goals. Think about our self and become selfish is acceptable when we are in the work field.
First, in the work field we can say that we don’t had friend’s even relatives, because sometimes they can be our biggest enemy. If we want to succeed we must and dare to cheat or we can say stab our competitors from behind.
Second, to achieve the promotion or goals we can use any kinds of way. Even the way we don’t really like it. For example we cheated the job or we work with other company to get something. We can also sacrifice our friends to get closer with the most important people in the company.
Last thing that we must remember is that we are alone in the company so we must think about our self and forget the rest. We work to achieve something is just for us and we don’t work harder for our friend. Even we so mean and cruel in the work field we do not need bring the attitude to the environments we living in. But most of people still think that in their house the still compete. With their neighbors, family, even with their own children. Because of that people in mostly big city that competing in the work field is usual, is selfish and stubborn.
From all that I can conclude that in work field we can be mean and selfish, but there is still a boundary for that. That’s correct if we are alone in the work field and do not need a friends but when we come out from that we must know that we still had family and friends. Being mean is needed in the work field but we must remember that we are human and human need others to live.
A cat is better than a dog...
The first one is because cats’ face is cuter than dogs’ face. If you see closer maybe you’ll notice that dogs’ face usually looks cute when they were young. When they grew older, their faces look ugly or not cute anymore. Unlike a dog, cat’s face still cute no matter she’s young or old. And her face also can make you happy, anyway.
The second reason is because cats can love us back. It doesn’t mean that a dog can not. As you know, a cat is usually spoiled. It makes her really need affection from us. She always wanted to be loved. If we love her, she can easily love us too. That makes me conclude that a cat can easily return our love back than a dog.
The last thing that makes me believe that a cat is better than a dog is because a cat didn’t like to lick. I like dog if he don’t lick me. A dog always licks us, moreover if he likes us. Of course I didn’t like that. Actually, it’s okay for me if a dog licks me, because I’m not a Moslem, but I think that’s disgusting and I really didn’t like it at all.
In conclusion, the reason why I like cats better than a dog is because cats' face is cuter than dogs' face, because cats can love us back, and because cats didn't like to lick. Now you already know what makes me like cats better than a dog. You can think it by yourself whether you still think that dog is better or you want to change your opinion that actually cat is better than a dog.
A Key for Successful Learning of English
related to the self-confidence. However, if you are a risk taker when trying out language, you need to make intelligent guesses, do not take silly risks or guess blindly. It’s because you have to be responsible towards your answer.
Great motivation is also essential for your English acquisition. Motivation means really wanting to learn English for a reason. Moreover, motivation to learn English can come from you and it means that you are doing it because you want to do it and have your own curiosity. Instead, your motivation can come from others and it means that based on reward from outside or when other influence. In addition, most people argued that intrinsic motivation is superior to extrinsic. It’s because internal motivation will keep you on learning for a long time and you will learn more.
HAVE A GOOD LOOKING AS BOYS
First of all, boys pay attention to their appearance to be more attractive. It happened when boys looking for a girl. Of course girls want expected if boys appear beautiful and smell good. Besides that many commercial add and movie stars that influence youngster to stereotype what kind of good boys with good appearance. I can see from the football player David Beckham. However, of course it should be in a certain limit. For instance, I had one bad experience with one. When we were shopping together, he was confused trying to choose between five black pairs of trousers. To me, they were all the same. Later it took him ages to finish grooming I stopped going out with him.
Next, boys want to keep their appearance to look good. In here for some boys they just want to look clean without like a girl. For example, they go to the hair cut rather barber, even they have body care product in their toilet (face cleansing and moisturizing, sun care, and hair removal). Though, they use it because of their needs but still some people will tease at him. Yet, it does not make them feel any less masculine or any less heterosexual.
The last, they are willing to push the traditional boundaries about being beautiful. It happens because for some people in old days they will say if boys pay more attention in their appearance they like girls. Still boys are very secure in their sexuality. They think it is not wrong if boys want to look neat, clean like what girls do, as long as it still has limitation. They do it because they thing they are human that should look after their appearance too.
As we can see, that there is no wrong or right statement when boys want to pay more attention in their appearance. They do it because they just want to look attractive, good and push the traditional boundaries about being beautiful. So, if you already know do not judge people just from their outer appearance.
motorcycle or car
From the shape of the motorcycle we can see that it does not need a large place to park. So, it make the rider easier to stop if they are getting tired. They can stop wherever they want. For example, on the side of the road. It will not disturb another people who also use the road because 1,5m place is enough to park a motorcycle. For them who use a car, they have to looking for a park or another large place to park their car.
Another reason is, by riding a motorcycle people can avoid the traffic jam. In the Idul Fitri holiday, there are a lot of people who use the road. The main road fill of thousands car and it can stired the traffic. They can do nothing if they are jammed on the traffic. For the motorcycle rider, they can lost from the traffic by passing a shink between two car which queue at the traffic. Or they can turn back to look for an alternative road.
In comparison, ride a motorcycle is cheaper than ride a car. First of all, for them who use their own vehicle, they have to take some preparation and a car will need more money to be prepared. Second, a car need more fuel than motorcycle so car user have to pay a lot to buy fuel. Third, if the car is broken on the way a car user have to bring their car to the garage and it will make them spend a lot of money because a car garage is expensive. The simplest thing that we can see is, if they want to stop to take a resr or having some meal they also spend more money to pay the park than if they use motorcycle.
It is easier to ride a motorcycle than a car in Idul Fitri holiday. It does not need a large place to park so it can help the rider to stop and take a rest wherever they want. They also can avoid the traffic jam. Besides that, ride a motorcycle is cheaper. Indeed, many people prefer to ride a motorcycle than a car to go back to their home town in Idul Fitri holiday.
Undetectable Mobile Phones Effects
In these days, mobile phone is not a new thing anymore. Many people are familiar with the use of it. People also known that there is no effect of using mobile phones. Several years ago, there was a warned to reduce the use of mobile phone because of its effect to the health. But the effects of using mobile phones for health are undetectable.
Mobile phones using can cause brain tumor. If the user uses the mobile phones closer to the ear when listening, they will have a 30% increased risk of the effect. The growth of tumor cells could be increased dramatically after exposure to the mobile phone radiation. Early symptoms of brain tumor can be hearing loss, loss of balance or noises in one ear. But all these are very common for many other reasons.
Moreover, cancer of Alzheimer is another effect that caused of using mobile phones. Alzheimer is a kind of disease like reducing in memorizing. The radiation from mobile phones already destroys cells in parts of brain. It destroys the soft part that important for memory, movement and learning. It could be terrifying in cases when someone who might normally get Alzheimer in old age, could get it much earlier.
As we know from this explanation, a cell phone can bring undetectable effects for human health. These effects actually are harmful to the body. But many people seems did not really notice and certain about that. They notice this as an ordinary symptom. That’s why the effects are undetectable.
Bali Bombing
Bombing is a familiar topic to discuss now. We can see in the headline of newspapers, in the news of television, even in the conversation everyday that talk about bombing. United Nation concerns about that and tries to fight against terrorism, especially to Moslem countries, such as Afghanistan, Iraq, and Iran. Since there is a suicide bombing explodes in Bali in 2002, Indonesia becomes one of the countries which United Nation concerns about. If we see the effect, we can say that Bali bombing is an irresponsible action.
Bali bombing causes a lot of people died and injured. More about 107 people died and 65 people injured in that accident. Most of them are foreign tourists who still enjoy their night and some Indonesian people who stay in the cafe. When the accident happens, they try to save their life, but the bomb damage everything, even their life. In the tragedy of Bali bombing, there are a lot of victims who do not know anything until suddenly they lost their life.
Tourists do not want to come to Bali again after the tragedy of Bali bombing. They want to leave Indonesia, especially Bali, as soon as the accident happens. Suddenly, Ngurah Rai airport becomes full of tourists. They want to back to their county which they think that it is safer. They think that Indonesia is a dangerous place to visit. They are afraid and want to be away from Indonesia. Tourists said “It is the last time for us to visit this country.”
Bali bombing makes the world has bad opinion about Indonesia. They bring Indonesia in the worst situation. The world does not believe Indonesia again. A lot of countries in the world do not want to invest their investment to Indonesia. They are afraid if someday that tragedy will happen again and of course they will lose everything they have in here. The world says that Indonesia is a country which full of terror and there are a lot of terrorists who are ready to kill people with their bomb. The world thinks that Indonesia is a dangerous country.
As you can see, terrorists who do Bali bombing can not think further about the effect. They cause a lot of bad effect to Indonesia. They do something disadvantageous. A lot of people died, tourists do not want to come to Bali, and bad opinion about Indonesia, are the real bad effect of Bali bombing. Terrorists just want to do everything they want but they do not concern about the effect.
Books
One of the books are contain about sex, porn, erotic story outside from education. For example, newspaper and magazine such as meteor, playboy, popular or FHM, they contained about sex. But they weren’t consuming to students. It was just for 21 above. It can make they’re mind is full negatively. And maybe the students doing like in the books.
Then, the books aren’t consume to students are about terrorism. We know that the last month, Indonesia have some problems with terrorism. They disturb and make a divorce. And Indonesia is disappointed because many terrorist are younger. The terrorist are thinking like that because they read a wrong book about Jihad and another books like that. They don’t know that is a wrong way. They can learn, but they didn’t know about the meaning of that.
The books are told about religion. If the books are insult one to another religion. May be one of the religion are angry and divorce. They disturb one to another follower religion. And it isn’t make peace in the world. Or the books are good to read but we can’t learn it goodly like we read. The books like that is for the people are really knows about that.
There are of course, not all of books are good to improve the mind of students. Actually, we know that we can kinds of books that we want to read but think it’s twice. The books are good to consume, if they’re contain something about education. It’s enough to see what the good of books for students. Then, choice the best books to thinking positively.
Kristin:essay
Some TV programs are forbidden to be watched by children. Programs that filled violation, for example, are really inappropriate for children. They are too young to be filled with something like that. Their memory on the brain is still plain to accept it. There will be influence on their behavior if they watching program that shouldn’t be watched. As a result, their character gets mature before the time.
Children must get education from TV programs. Beside as an entertainment, there are some educational programs on TV, in which children can learn something. Take, for example, kids program on Lativi named Dora. From that, children less than 5 years old can learn to count, remember thing’s names, etc. Children can learn through an interesting way.
Children have never been able to choose appropriate TV programs. So, parents must pay attention on what kind of programs their children watch on TV. If they watch wrong program, parents must give warning. By the way, children will be accustomed to know which and what kind of TV programs should they watch. That must be done because children still too early to know what kind of TV programs should they watch.
Paying good attention towards children when they are watching TV is a must for parents. How busy the parents are, they must lead their children to watch TV programs that are allowed for children.
Writing time!
outline
Topic statement : 1. boys pay attention in their appearance in order to be more attractive.
2. Next, they just want to keep their appeance in order to look good.
3. Bessides that, they are willing to push the traditional boundaries about being beauty.
Conclution : There is no wrong or right statement when boys want to keep their appearance good , so do not judge people from outer appearance.
Monday, November 21, 2005
Silvi@_intoduction and opinion
Introduction
Silvi@_outline
Intoduction paragraf: turnabout
Development paragraf: The reason why I like cats more than a dog
- Cats' face is cuter than dogs' face
- Cats can love us back
- Cats didn't like to lick
Concluding paragraf: From these reason, now you know why I like cats more than a dog
Friday, November 18, 2005
Pringgo: introduction
Pringgo: Outline
Artika: Introduction & Opinion
My name is Artika Ayu Kusuma. I was born in Salatiga, 19 years ago. I am a college student of English Department of Satya Wacana Christian University. I like reading novel, watching TV and listening to music. Jazz is my favorite although I like all kinds of music actually. I am a rather moody, kind, and cheerful person. Sometimes, I like to be a silent person too.
MY OPINION
I think, using blog in writing course is challenging for me. Blog is completely new to me although I already know about cyber world, but not much. About blog itself, I don’t have any experience before. I just heard that blog is like a diary but everyone can read it too. Maybe it will be an interesting and exciting one because many people can read my writing. Hope that someday (maybe...) I’ll be well-known because of my writing ;). Yet, using blog makes some difficulties to me. I must go to warnet, spend my time and money more there and also quite harder to submit the work when it almost in the due date.
Artika: Outline
Thesis Statement: The effects of using mobile phones for health are undetectable
Topic sentence: 1. Using mobile phones can cause brain tumor.
2. Mobile phones radio frequency can harm body cells and damage DNA.
3. Cancer of Alzheimer is another effect that caused of using mobile phones.
Concluding sentence: As we know that from this explanation, a cell phone can bring undetectable effects for human health.
Diana: Outline
Thesis statement : Bali bombing is an irresponsible action.
Topic sentences :
1. Bali bombing causes a lot of people died and injured.
2. Bali bombing makes the world has bad opinion about Indonesia.
3. Tourist do not want to come to Bali again after the tragedy of Bali bombing.
Conclusion : As you can see, terrorist who did Bali bombing couldn’t think further with the effect.
Introduction about Myself
My full name is Diana Wahyu Putriani, but my friends usually call me Nana. I was born 19 years ago in Salatiga and live here until now. I like listening to the music and watching movies. I am a moody person. I’m easy to get bored with something usual. I’m a silent person too. I just want to talk if I think that it is important.
Opinion
Using blogs in writing course is difficult for me. Actually, I don’t really understand about internet, and of course I don’t understand what blog is too. I need to ask someone to help me using blogs. I must go to internet center if I have to send the tasks because I don’t have my own. I can’t type faster, so I spend much time in the internet center to type the tasks. It means that I spend much money too to pay the bill. It’s confusing to use blogs in writing course.
Monica: outline
1. SWCU is a better college to study than the others in my city
2. It is located in the main road. So, it is easy to be reached than the others.
3. The quality education of SWCU has been recognized in Indonesia.
4. SWCU provides many modern facilities for the students to study.
5. There are some reasons why SWCU becomes a better college to study than the others in my city
Devi: Outline
Cellphone is a popular thing now.
1.Cellphone is very well known,because many people have and use it for their way to communicate.
2.Cellphone is being famed because it is always up to date and easy to use.
3.It is not a strange thing for us again because if you want it,you can have it with achievable price.
Wasti: Intro, opinion and outline
Task 1
My name is Wasti Darmayanti. I was born in
Using blogs in a writing course is an interesting and terrifying experience. I have ever heard a word blogs, but I do not know what the use of it. I realize that in a modern era right now I have to know but in the other hand I am afraid when my writing is read by other people. Right now people around the world will read and give a comment about it. Yet right now I have to learn to listen and accept other people opinion to become a good writer.
Outline;
Thesis statement: Nowadays, boys are more pay attention for their appearance.
Topic sentence:
- Boys are pay attention for their appearance to be more attractive.
- They are willing to push traditional boundaries about become beautiful.
- Besides that they just want to keep their appearance looks good.
Conclusion: there is no wrong or right when boys or girls want to keep their appearance, so do not judge people from their outer.
Andry: Outline
TS : Being mean is needed in the work field
#we can use all kinds of things to achieve the goals
Andry: introduction & opinion
My name is andry, I 21 years old. I live at
In my opinion using blogs in writing course is kindda good things. I agree about the aim of using blogs can give experience of having a wider audience rather just the teacher that can only see the writing. And using blogs can give us more knowledge about writing skills that others people had, not just other people but people around the world, because we globally connected in the internet. We can also learn toward the comments about our blogs from others.
Tribuwana: introduction, opinion & outline
I am Wana (Tribuwana). I am studying in Faculty of language and literature in SWCU in Salatiga now. I want to be a teacher and a journalist one day. I like sport, listening music and watching television. I'm happy when I found someone who like to talk about religi, pshycology and phylosofy. I live in a boarding house. In addition, I always miss my parents, and my sisters. Especially, my favorite foods. my main hobby is snacking, so if you come to my boarding house it would be better if you bring some snack ok. I thing it is a good idea:}
Using blog in a writing class is a new experience for me. Actually, it is interesting. In addition I can learn more how to writing well from your comment or critisms. I like to write a letter to my parents in Tegal and I really enjoy it. Yet, it is different if I have to write in “blog”. I hope there is always somebody who would like to give me a/some comment or “good” critism. So don't forget to give me critism or comment ok:) I appreciate it.
THANK YOU B4.
Outline
Your favorite music is a reflection of your personality.
# Jazz music reflect a person who has clear principle and very explicit.
# Indy music reflect a creative person and a person who brave enough to do some extraordinary things
# Classical music reflect a person who always keeps his principle and conservative
Devi: about me & my opinion
My name is Devi,I am 19 years old.I live in Salatiga exactly in Blotongan.I am a student of Satya Wacana Cristian University at English Faculty.I like music very much,especially grunge music.My hobbies are playing guitar,sleeping,eating,and of course listening to music.And I am a high temper person,I can angry easily.That's all and thank you for your attention.
MY OPINION:
Using blogs in a writing course actually bring some advantages for the students.First,the students are not only learn writing,but also improve our knowledge in technology.Second,we are not bored with the tasks,because it is different from the other teacher's tasks.It is very interesting because many teachers give their tasks to be colleted in their boxs.Third,by using blogs,I can know Mrs.Nenny's email address.So,using blogs in a writing course is very useful for us.
Thursday, November 17, 2005
Aji: Read me
When first time I heard my teacher explained about using blogs for writing course I thought it was a good idea of hers. The typical teachers in my department will just give assignments and ask the students to submit them in their boxes, and my writing teacher used to do this. This blogs method is quite useful since everyone who has blogger’s account able to give comments to the students' works. It means that not only the teacher who could read and give any comments but also the other students and the“outsiders”. Speaking frankly we are bored with the old method of writing course, it is kind of unexciting. I believe if we started something unexciting we could not achieve something much as well. I wish with the new interesting method that our teacher given, we, the students would improve our writing skill. Any comment?
Finally, I would like to show you the outline of my thesis statement.
Being rich is sometimes bothersome.
•There will be lots of people who call themselves poor who ask for your help by giving them money.
•You will feel that everyone surround you are only interested in your money and it will create an insecure feeling.
•You won't be able to sleep well every single night because you are afraid of thieves stealing your wealth.
Kristin: outline
Thesis Statement: Parents must be able select suitable programs on TV for their children.
Topic sentences :
1.There are some hazardous programs on TV to be watched by children.
a. Some examples of those hazardous programs for children.
b. The effects of watching hazardous programs on TV for children.
2.Children must get educational programs on TV.
a. Children can get education not only from school but also TV.
b. The advantages of educational programs on TV for children.
3.Children have never been able choose appropriate programs on TV for themselves.
a. They still need indicator from parents in this case.
b. They don't know what programs on TV should they watch.
Concluding sentence: How busy the parents are, they must be able direct their children to the appropriate programs on TV.
Rosa: outline
Many people prefer to ride a motorcycle than a car to go back to their hometown in Idul Fitri holiday.
1.Motorcycle make the driver easier to take a rest if they are tired on the way because it does not need a large place to park.
2.By motorcycle people can avoid the traffic jam.
3.Using motorcycle is cheaper than using a car.
Kristin: Intro & opinion
My name is Kristin Setiati. I am 19 years old. I am from Magelang and now I continue my study in Satya Wacana Christian University, Salatiga. In Salatiga, I live in a boarding house. I like living in a boarding house because I can get some new friends.
My opinion about using blogs in a writing course:
This is my first time using blogs in a writing course. Honestly, I know nothing about it, but when I try to use it, I can imagine how interesting it is. I can get more comments about my writing. Probably, I can also have some new friends, which give their comments. I can get more experience. So, instead of joining writing course itself, I can get knowledge of technology about using blogs. It really opens my mind about something new for me.
Rosa: introduction & opinion
University.I am 18 years old.
I live in Salatiga,Central java,Indonesia.I like music
very much.I have a cute pet named Cipluk.He is a dog.I
love having a long chat with all of my friend.I can do
everything for all of my friend.I also can be
dangerous for people who distrubing me.bye....
Using blog in a writing course bring some
advantages.We will get some useful coments on our blog
post.It can help us to improve our writing.Usually,we
only get mark from our teacher in class,with blog we
will have more audience.they can share their
experiences in writing which can develop our knowledge
in writing.We will be able to publish our writing
piece to the world.Many people will read it.It will
make us more satisfied if they are interest with our writing.
Wednesday, November 16, 2005
Retno: my thesis statement...
Some characteristics are essential for successful learning of English.
Topic Sentences:
§ For successful learning of English you need to have self-confidence.
§ Being a risk-taking person is also necessary for your success in learning English.
§ Great motivation is essential for your English acquisition.
Sri Retnowati_112004042
Writing 2e
Retno's introductory n opinion...
My name is Sri Retnowati and you just can call me Retno or No’. Now, I’m studying at English Department, Faculty of Language and Literature, Satya Wacana Christian University. In my spare time, I like to watch television or just listen to the radio. I also like to chat with my friends to share all the information that we have, but the most wanted information is of course about a person that we admire. There is also something that I hate in this world. That is someone disturbs me when I’m sleeping.;)
My Opinion…
One of the subjects that I have is writing. Recently, the teacher makes a new method when giving the lesson. She asked her students to use blogs in this writing course. For me this is my first time using the method. In my opinion, I think this method is useful for students. The students will not be bored with the conventional method of teaching writing again. They also can learn more about their mistakes in writing by paying attention to the comments that they get.
Tuesday, November 15, 2005
The first and second tasks
Yet, I'm so proud of my students because they took the challenge bravely, and I'm positive in any ways that they will produce interesting pieces of writing.
The first task that I set for them is to write a paragraph of their introduction containing their bio and a paragraph expressing their opinion of the use of blogging to publish their writing piece. The second task is an outline of their five paragraph essay, containing a thesis statement and three topic sentences. The deadline is this Friday at 10 AM (West Indonesian Time, GMT +7). Good luck, everyone!
To our curious, faithful and critical readers, we will appreciate if you can leave your constructive comments to the students' postings. They will have to write the essay on Wednesday next week at 4 - 6 PM, so we expect to get your comments by Sunday/Monday.
Thanks for stopping by!
Neny Isharyanti
The teacher
Tuesday, November 08, 2005
Warm Welcome!
The aim of this blog is to provide a greater audience to my students of Writing 2. By posting their essays in this blog, I hope that they will be able to get their voice heard by the world and for them to get some useful comments to improve their writing pieces.
Please help us by leaving your comments. Any comments will be welcome.
For my students, welcome to the blogging world and have a good experience.
Neny Isharyanti
The teacher